Friday, September 28, 2007

Little Green Snake

After you died,
I found you
bloody in the grass.

I mourned,
little green snake.

I held your cold body in my hands,
my fingers touched,
the bumps of your scales,
felt the softness of your belly.

How I wish,
you would look at me
with your round black eyes.

Dear Reader:
This poem was inspired by Emily Dickinson's poem, "A Narrow Fellow in the Grass." In her poem Emily write about a young boy coming upon a snake in the grass, that at first fascinates him and then frightens him. I studied this poem in on of my literature classes. This poem brought back memories from when I was nine years old. My family and I were living in a rented house in Orangeville, California, a suburb of Sacramento. I don't remember when I learned that green garter snakes are harmless snakes but I regarded them with a fascination that I would have given to butterflies or frogs. This poem is based on my literal memory of finding and feeling sad for a little dead garter snake.

2 comments:

Claudia Blanton said...

I love the clarity of your poem, I felt as if I observed you, observing the snake.
Also the explanation was great, as I imagine at times, what the motivation, the feeling behind the poems, that I read, were.
Thank you!

Claudia Blanton
http://livingpossibilities.blogspot.com

Lindsey said...

Lisa, as I was reading your poem it reminded me of another and I wanted to share!!! I was reading through some poetry by a christian woman, unnamed, and stumbled a crossed this....

While watering my garden



one day I did see,



two little eyes...staring at me.



Frozen with fear



screams stuck in my throat,



heart beating fast



eyes wild and remote.



I ran like a panther



straight into a tree,



mouth gapped wide open



a spider, I did eat.



Back at the garden



warmed by the sun,



a little green snake



laughed at the fun.